My persuasive is about Christmas should people use artificial or real Christmas trees. For this paragraph I’m going to talk about why it’s good to use artificial trees than real trees. It’s good to use artificial trees because it helps the environment and lowers the chance of global warming also you can keep an artificial tree for many years but with a real one only one year. And most artificial trees come with pre-lit lights on the tree, and they cost less in the long term because you only pay for it once.
Real trees are good for the economy, but bad for the environment. The good things about real trees are that it increases the sales every year because you cannot reuse last years trees so people are forced to buy new trees every year. But the bad thing is that we are cutting down trees a lot one time a year.
I liked this post. It was very good but instead of saying "My persuasive is about" You should of put: My topic. It would of been even better if you put your personal opinion in the post too.
ReplyDeleteMitchell you finally posted something this week. It is a great post. You should have vioced your own opinion thuogh. Great post!
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